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诗的第一节将“境”叠加处理，然后以“脆弱和张惶”来收束，很好地做到了。孤城最后一片悬着的叶子落了整棵树空荡荡的风从这个枝叉窜到那个枝叉毫无忌惮的样子，像那个常在鼓楼街肆意叫喊的疯女人改造后的东西大街宽宽绰绰人车如流谁会在意一棵秋天的树○猪猪：这首诗是这组里最好的。在猪猪看来，这首诗将集体无意识和集体无知呈现出来，效果相当好。诗歌整体流畅自然，发人深省。“最后一片悬着的叶子落了/整棵树空荡荡的/风从这个枝叉窜到那个枝叉/毫无忌惮的样子”是不是一个末日预言？而在这个场景之后，突兀间来一句“像那个常在鼓楼街肆意叫喊/的疯女人”。你会作何感想？在这里，李子向猪猪呈现了一个萧杀的氛围和诡异的场景，迫使猪猪想得更多，当我们像萧瑟秋风一样，去摧毁我们内心的“树”，当最后一片叶子落下，我们内心的灵魂是不是“疯女人”。推而广之，现时的集体无意识地对自然秩序的破坏，到头来就不仅仅是儿时清清水不见这样简单的事了。尽管如此，街道还在改造，城市还在扩张，人们还在画地为牢，并不断因为牢房的价格而喋喋不休。。。谁会留意那些应该留存并与我们生生相息自然正在被我们捂住，正在窒息并逐渐消亡。。。留给我们的只是一座孤城吧。这两天事多，断断续续写，思维不连贯。。。晕死。。"}